Symbolism
    During World War 1, there was an eighteen-year-old named Goerge, 
who was drafted into the military. Goerge was eager and excited, as any 
British lad should be, to make a name for himself. He was stationed in 
the 501st battalion along with his friend Josh. The 501st  did not 
receive much action though, they spent their days aimlessly marching and
 shooting at distant targets. Every night, for one single year, Goerge 
and Josh sat around the campfire, telling each other what they would do 
come time for an attack. Across Europe, the Allied forces were being 
pushed back and lost many men. Then the day came when they were called 
into action. Men gathered their gear. George tied a small handkerchief 
around the hilt of his gun. 
Wizz! The soldier only feet from Goerge fell to the ground. Goerge looked around, he could hear only muffled shouting. He stopped. Time stopped. Josh pulled him behind a moss-covered rock, and the fighting resumed. Goerge looked for his commander, but there was only an empty horse. He wanted to leave, to run. Then, in the face of despair, Goerge saw his families handkerchief. Suddenly, his soul was filled with courage. He rose from behind cover and plunged forward into the thicket of the battle.
Symbolism: The handkerchief symbolizes courage.
Wizz! The soldier only feet from Goerge fell to the ground. Goerge looked around, he could hear only muffled shouting. He stopped. Time stopped. Josh pulled him behind a moss-covered rock, and the fighting resumed. Goerge looked for his commander, but there was only an empty horse. He wanted to leave, to run. Then, in the face of despair, Goerge saw his families handkerchief. Suddenly, his soul was filled with courage. He rose from behind cover and plunged forward into the thicket of the battle.
Symbolism: The handkerchief symbolizes courage.
This is a entertaining story. I think this story would feel a lot more realistic if you gave a backstory to the handkerchief. I think that would make your story a lot more believable.
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